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GA review

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Nominator: FanofPopMusic (talk · contribs) 17:40, 19 October 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: Arconning (talk · contribs) 10:24, 30 October 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Shall review. Arconning (talk) 10:24, 30 October 2025 (UTC)[reply]

@FanofPopMusic My comments. Arconning (talk) 16:57, 10 November 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Prose and MoS

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  • Infobox says N.W.I., lead says NWI, Composition says "NWi", what is it? This should be uniform.

Lead and infobox

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  • "Silk Sonic - .Paak's collaborative work with Bruno Mars -, with their chemistry being the object of praise.", why the hyphens?
  • " 70's music", use 70s or '70s instead as they are grammatically correct.

Background and release

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  • First mention in the body for "Anderson .Paak", "Mariah Carey", and "Here for It All" should be wikilinked.
  • " "an "I'm giving up on this situation" type thing"", quotation marks in a quotation should be changed to single quotation marks.
  • " Billboard reported that the track is Carey's", " Billboard reported that the track was Carey's"

Composition

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  • "has been described as one of the "groovier moments" on Here for It All.", by whom?
  • "It features "swirling" production, live drums, and "relaxed" arrangements.", this is a bit confusing, what exactly is a swirling production?
  • "2023's Victoria Monét's Jaguar II album.", "Victoria Monét's album, Jaguar II (2023)"

Critical reception

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  • ""a lavish and richly arranged tune, featuring [Paak]'s soulful vocals melding wonderfully with Carey's.", where's the end quote?
  • "Sperisen of The Daily Bruin", just put Sperisen.
  • "Correspondingly, the description of the duet by Sperisen of The Daily Bruin stressed as the "finest collaboration" on the album, highlighting that the "chemistry between the Silk Sonic member's vocals and Carey's luscious lilts leaves the lyrics to play second fiddle, but this is no concern when the song's rich, luxurious '70s vibe is so heavenly."", the flow of this sentence doesn't make sense. Could be rewritten as "Correspondingly, the description of the duet by Sperisen of The Daily Bruin stressed as the "finest collaboration" on the album, highlighting that the "chemistry between the Silk Sonic member's vocals and Carey's luscious lilts leaves the lyrics to play second fiddle" although further stated that "this is no concern when the song's rich, luxurious '70s vibe is so heavenly.""
  • Capitalize the "M" in "AllMusic"
  • "mostly Diana Ross and Marvin Gaye or Stevie Wonder and Syreeta Wright.", this isn't grammatically correct. I can see in the original source that it's taken directly from there... shouldn't this be in quotes + a [sic] template?
  • "mimick[s]", "mimic[s]"

Music video

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  • No issues.

Live performances and the rest...

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  • Don't wikilink Rolling Stone and Billboard as they're wikilinked previously in the body.

Media

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  • Album cover is properly licensed. All good.

Refs

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  • Earwig seems to be alright.
  • Spot checks: 12, 16, 19, 30. All good.

Misc

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  • No ongoing edit war, broad enough information, neutral.
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