Talk:Raymond Cammock

Raymond Cammock has been listed as one of the Warfare good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.

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Date	Process	Result
November 5, 2025	Good article nominee	Listed

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Military history: Aviation / Biography / South Pacific / World War II

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GA review

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Nominator: Zawed (talk · contribs) 00:00, 1 November 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: Djmaschek (talk · contribs) 21:53, 3 November 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Initial review

I plan to review this article for GA class. Djmaschek (talk) 21:53, 3 November 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Review 1

@Zawed: Please make the following edits or argue your case for not doing so. Got to quit now. Will finish up later. Djmaschek (talk) 22:28, 3 November 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox: Add 485 Squadron (1942). Done

Have added, I originally omitted it since he flew relatively few sorties with the squadron. Zawed (talk) 08:34, 4 November 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Operation Diver, paragraph 2, sentence 1: "On 28 June" > "On 28 June 1944". Accepted

From the context of the previous paragraph, I think it is clear that it is 1944. However, I have rephrased that paragraph to help minimise any potential for confusion. Zawed (talk) 08:34, 4 November 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Review2

@Zawed: If I find myself looking around for the year, then I assume other readers might do the same. I was curious whether Cammock was buried in an Allied WW2 military cemetery, but it is apparently not the case. I'm going to assess as GA class, since I don't see anything wrong. Djmaschek (talk) 00:44, 5 November 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the review, much appreciated. I have added a little extra info RE his place of burial. Zawed (talk) 08:19, 5 November 2025 (UTC)[reply]