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[edit]What is going on in this section? Numerous grammatical mistakes and errors. Fal2x (talk) 01:31, 19 January 2026 (UTC)
- A student editor added most of this for a Wiki Education-supported class at Hofstra. Same editor also made several suboptimal changes to existing text. Class is over, so I would just delete rather than try to salvage. diff.Dialectric (talk) 01:56, 19 January 2026 (UTC)
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[edit]There's huge portions of this article that are hard/harder to read because of the grammar. Different tenses, words spelled incorrectly, incomplete sentences. Lyssy x (talk) 02:43, 20 January 2026 (UTC)
Dubious: 1. description of static electricity effects, 2. Oxygen depletion
[edit]Egan's book is cited for the assertion that static electricity can "short a car," meaning that the engine stalls because of damage to its ignition system. This claim is found on pages 7, 88, 195, 197, and 204. As examples of the automotive ignitions systems of that era, Ford's Model A (1927-1932) and Model B (1932-1934) used Kettering ignition systems. The Kettering system (or breaker point system) was introduced in 1912 and was the industry standard for over 70 years. This is a simple electromechanical system that is not affected by charge accumulation in the overall car. The far more likely cause is the direct effects of dust sucked into the engine intake system. The Model A had no air filter, while the Model B did.
Second, the article avers, "there wasn't enough oxygen within the storm to even keep a lamp going." Again, this doesn't square with science. Other than a minor dilution effect, choking dust doesn't change the composition of air.
Egan's book makes these and other sensational assertions. E.g.
1. "static was so strong it electrocuted a jackrabbit," p. 172. This is hyperbolic and implausible.
2. "The static had singed the foliage of the watermelon plants." p. 180.
3. "Gardens were burned and limp, electrocuted by static." p. 198.
For 2. and 3., a necessary condition for these dust storms was drought. Yet the simple and obvious explanation of lack of water is not considered. Instead, this author has valence for the more hair-raising tale.
4. A dust storm "producing enough static electricity to power New York." p. 221. Again, not possibly plausible.
Furthermore, newspaper accounts by Associated Press and United Press correspondents sent to the region for weeks to report on the dusters including Black Sunday fail to make any mention related to static electricity even though they experienced the dusters' full fury.
Egan's book contains no citations for these suspect statements. The facts of the Dust Bowl are impressive enough without such embellishment. Unless corroborated by a reliable source, this book should not be cited. Yankeepapa13 (talk) 20:01, 26 January 2026 (UTC)
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