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GA review

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The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.


This review is transcluded from Talk:Alectryon excelsus/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Nominator: Alexeyevitch (talk · contribs) 02:22, 18 May 2026 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: A.Cython (talk · contribs) 14:48, 19 May 2026 (UTC)[reply]


I will review this as part of GARC#86.A.Cython(talk) 14:48, 19 May 2026 (UTC)[reply]

I am not an expert of biology so this is a review from a casual reader. Overall, I enjoyed reading the article as it is well written and sourced. There are some minor issues to be addressed before concluding the review. My comments are below.A.Cython(talk) 23:03, 20 May 2026 (UTC)[reply]

@A.Cython: All has been addressed. Alexeyevitch(talk) 00:38, 21 May 2026 (UTC)[reply]

Various

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  • No edit war
  • Neutral
  • Focused and broad enough
  • No copyright issues, Earwig's Copyvio Detector gives 21.9% flagging the titles of journal articles
  • Figures have appropriate licences and relevant figure captions

Prose & MoS

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  • Fruits are found in hairy brown seed capsules which also have red, fleshy parts that surround a black seed which grows out and splits the capsule. (added emphasis) This is a bit awkward sentence having two "which", consider rephrasing it. The second one could be replaced by "that"
    • Fixed
  • lists the flowers are → listed the flowers as
    • Fixed
  • did not obeserve observe ?
    • Fixed
  • and cabinets and add comma after "cabinets"
    • Added
  • hair oil wikilink?
    • Added

Sources

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Spot check: 1, 4, 14

  • remove the url link for "Which Native Tree? New Zealand Native Trees" as it points to a commercial website
    • k

Final Comments

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Congratulations to Alexeyevitch for bringing this article about a plant from New Zealand to GA family! Well done! A.Cython(talk) 01:04, 21 May 2026 (UTC)[reply]

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.