User contributions for Bayerischermann

6 February 2021

• 22:1322:13, 6 February 2021 diff hist −19 Talk:Rapid-onset gender dysphoria controversy →NPOV concerns
• 21:2521:25, 6 February 2021 diff hist +1 m Talk:Rapid-onset gender dysphoria controversy →NPOV concerns
• 21:2521:25, 6 February 2021 diff hist +2 m Talk:Rapid-onset gender dysphoria controversy →NPOV concerns
• 21:2421:24, 6 February 2021 diff hist −16 m Talk:Rapid-onset gender dysphoria controversy →NPOV concerns
• 21:2221:22, 6 February 2021 diff hist +2,054 Talk:Rapid-onset gender dysphoria controversy →NPOV concerns

4 February 2021

• 15:1315:13, 4 February 2021 diff hist +53 Talk:Rapid-onset gender dysphoria controversy →NPOV concerns
• 15:1015:10, 4 February 2021 diff hist +10 m Talk:Rapid-onset gender dysphoria controversy →NPOV concerns
• 15:0615:06, 4 February 2021 diff hist +3,839 Talk:Rapid-onset gender dysphoria controversy →NPOV concerns: new section
• 02:3102:31, 4 February 2021 diff hist +157 Rapid-onset gender dysphoria controversy The magazine article and blog post that were previously cited do not reflect that post-publication review arose from social-political influence ("transgender activists"). The Science magazine article states the opposite (see quote from Heber). The mention of "transgender activists" is that they were "angry" about the publication (hardly a surprise). No past talk page discussion on this point I could find in archive. I kept it NPOV. Take it to the talk page for further discussion.

27 January 2021

• 17:0317:03, 27 January 2021 diff hist +8 Rapid-onset gender dysphoria controversy No edit summary
• 17:0117:01, 27 January 2021 diff hist +48 m Rapid-onset gender dysphoria controversy Reading over the initial comments on PLOS One, which is where the cited references links as its source, I don't see any mention of "transgender activists" as describing the authors of these comments; one author even describes himself/herself as a clinician writing from clinical experience

26 January 2021

• 21:1421:14, 26 January 2021 diff hist −503 New York City Department of Health and Mental Hygiene →Controversy: I'm puzzled why this included. It doesn't sound like even the slightest bit of a controversy (rather, it's a scientific fact), and the reference link doesn't even seem related. Feel free to include a reference if somehow it is relevant, but I can't see it being so

20 September 2014

• 20:1520:15, 20 September 2014 diff hist −20 m USIS (company) →Edward Snowden background check and investigation
• 20:1520:15, 20 September 2014 diff hist +10 m USIS (company) →Edward Snowden background check and investigation
• 20:1420:14, 20 September 2014 diff hist +230 USIS (company) More accurate paraphrasing of the work on Snowden, clarified the agency Schmitz belongs to, and added a direct quotation of the vague reference by McFarland to problems with Snowden's re-investigations (the previous version used a misleading paraphrase)
• 20:0220:02, 20 September 2014 diff hist −20 m USIS (company) No edit summary
• 20:0220:02, 20 September 2014 diff hist −101 USIS (company) 1. Made it clear USIS does more than background investigations 2. Deleted information that confused work by OPM with work by USIS. USIS does only the field work for background investigations as OPM-credential investigators.
• 19:4319:43, 20 September 2014 diff hist +2 USIS USIS is a federal government contractor. It originally just did background investigations, but since it added several large unrelated contracts, it is more accurate to refer to it as a government contractor without refering to background investigations

21 November 2009

• 22:2522:25, 21 November 2009 diff hist +2 m Grenville ministry grammar

20 August 2009

• 19:0219:02, 20 August 2009 diff hist +82 Mr. Blue Sky →Use in media: It's also the theme for LAX

16 August 2009

• 01:2901:29, 16 August 2009 diff hist −148 James (given name) Undid revision 308171544 by 82.15.255.188 (talk)

26 June 2009

• 17:4217:42, 26 June 2009 diff hist −24 NationStates →Forums: The citation said the exact opposite of what the user thought it said

22 June 2009

• 20:2820:28, 22 June 2009 diff hist +2 m Dmitri Polyakov →Early life

25 May 2009

• 15:0315:03, 25 May 2009 diff hist −16 Tokyo subway sarin attack →Aum/Aleph today: must be a translation problem; there's no such thing as the "Public Security Committee," but there is a "Public Safety Commission"

30 April 2009

• 02:1202:12, 30 April 2009 diff hist −24 Blackwater (company) Changed the link to the official Web site to the current official Web site: http://xecompany.com/

3 April 2009

• 19:4719:47, 3 April 2009 diff hist +11 Aramark {{Advert}}

28 March 2009

• 16:0016:00, 28 March 2009 diff hist −89 m Pago Pago International Airport "utilize" is not a fancy equivalent for "use"; "utilize" means "practical or profitable use"

15 March 2009

• 19:1219:12, 15 March 2009 diff hist +14 Dative case →The dative case in English: {{citeneeded}} for"most modern grammarians" disregarding the traditional labels

28 February 2009

• 01:3201:32, 28 February 2009 diff hist −33 Multi-service tactical brevity code No need for the jargon template, as discussion on the talk page (and common sense) shows

20 February 2009

• 23:5423:54, 20 February 2009 diff hist +18 User:Bayerischermann {{User UChicago}}

15 February 2009

• 18:2918:29, 15 February 2009 diff hist +545 Wikipedia:Main Page/Errors →Errors in In the news: Colgan Air Flight 3407
• 18:2418:24, 15 February 2009 diff hist +2 m Continental Airlines →Colgan Air Flight 3407: the article is at "Connection" now

14 February 2009

• 20:4420:44, 14 February 2009 diff hist +708 Talk:Colgan Air Flight 3407 →Requested move

18 January 2009

• 04:4404:44, 18 January 2009 diff hist −108 Niskayuna High School Undid revision 259550773 by Eastcoastdamost (talk)
• 02:3802:38, 18 January 2009 diff hist +1 m Lyttle Lytton Contest less -> fewer

16 January 2009

• 23:1123:11, 16 January 2009 diff hist +190 US Airways Flight 1549 →Ditching: added mention of Garuda flight 421

28 December 2008

• 23:0523:05, 28 December 2008 diff hist +3 m Pre-medical →Pre-med timeline: good writers avoid awkward and politically charged language

11 December 2008

• 18:2018:20, 11 December 2008 diff hist +513 Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Alexandros Grigoropoulos →Alexandros Grigoropoulos

15 November 2008

• 18:0818:08, 15 November 2008 diff hist 0 m All your base are belong to us "Internet" must be capitalized; it is a proper noun.
• 00:0800:08, 15 November 2008 diff hist 0 m America's Army →America's Army 3.0: no need for capitalization

25 August 2008

• 23:0623:06, 25 August 2008 diff hist −69 m Gateway, Inc. grammar ("Gateway" is singular in most cases; no one normally says "Gateway are." Thus, "it" is the proper pronoun. "Web" is a proper noun, an abbreviatied form of "World Wide Web.")

20 August 2008

• 20:0920:09, 20 August 2008 diff hist +25 m Nevada Added traditional abbreviation
• 20:0720:07, 20 August 2008 diff hist +28 m Minnesota Added traditional abbreviation

23 June 2008

• 15:3015:30, 23 June 2008 diff hist +35 Tim Russert →Death: 1. No source states that the co-worker was currently trained in CPR. 2. The person attempted rescue breathing on Russert, not CPR, according to the footnote at the end of the paragraph.

4 June 2008

• 01:0901:09, 4 June 2008 diff hist +381 Talk:24th Special Tactics Squadron German version larger?

1 June 2008

• 17:1317:13, 1 June 2008 diff hist −8 Riesen "rich European" chocalate is clearly not NPOV
• 17:1117:11, 1 June 2008 diff hist −208 User:Bayerischermann {{User:Otolemur crassicaudatus/Userboxes/World War II}}

25 April 2008

• 01:2401:24, 25 April 2008 diff hist +1 m Niskayuna High School →Notable alumni
• 01:2401:24, 25 April 2008 diff hist +30 Niskayuna High School →Notable alumni: *Elizabeth Rosner, author
• 01:2301:23, 25 April 2008 diff hist −113 Niskayuna High School Undid revision 207702513 by 129.3.141.53 (talk)