Legacy IP contributions for 65.183.135.166

13 February 2008

• 03:1103:11, 13 February 2008 diff hist −161 Sign function →Definition: Removed reference for definition of signum function, as its just a Word document of some teacher's notes. We need a better reference!

7 December 2007

• 06:3806:38, 7 December 2007 diff hist −75 Cyberterrorism →The basic definition of Cyber-Terrorism...: Removed spurious comment
• 06:3606:36, 7 December 2007 diff hist +18 Cyberterrorism made first sentence not sound awkward

2 December 2007

• 03:2503:25, 2 December 2007 diff hist +233 Reporters Without Borders →Robert Ménard on torture: revised earlier revision on robert menard statements concerning torture, for style, fairness, clarity, etc.
• 02:4502:45, 2 December 2007 diff hist −13 Reporters Without Borders →Robert Ménard on torture: (To say the quote says torture is "acceptable in some cases" is a poor reading. Rather, he says someone might allow it when a loved one is threatened. Please more NPOV

29 November 2007

• 01:3301:33, 29 November 2007 diff hist +121 Talk:Charles-Henri Sanson →Wrong dates: new section
• 01:1601:16, 29 November 2007 diff hist +3 Guillotine →Development: "ancien" means "former" (as opposed to "old")
• 00:3900:39, 29 November 2007 diff hist +242 Talk:Marie Antoinette →Entrails?!!: new section

28 November 2007

• 21:2021:20, 28 November 2007 diff hist +733 Talk:Network Time Protocol →Clarification needed?: new section
• 21:1421:14, 28 November 2007 diff hist −5 Network Time Protocol →NTP timestamps: Someone apparently doesn't know what "reminiscent of" means...
• 08:0308:03, 28 November 2007 diff hist +233 Talk:Gene expression programming →What does this mean???: new section
• 00:4800:48, 28 November 2007 diff hist +574 Talk:Nostradamus →"Universally regarded as by far the best": new section

21 November 2007

• 19:4519:45, 21 November 2007 diff hist −290 Ingrown nail →Home care: Removed advice to cut down side of nail with scissor (home surgery). Any podiatrist will tell you this is a BAD idea. You NEED anesthesia so you can get a clean cut (go to a doctor!)

20 November 2007

• 06:4306:43, 20 November 2007 diff hist −45 Togo (dog) Removed redundant sentence fragment

16 November 2007

• 05:3405:34, 16 November 2007 diff hist −5 Arrest and assassination of Ngo Dinh Diem →Diem's escape: grammar
• 05:2105:21, 16 November 2007 diff hist +9 Arrest and assassination of Ngo Dinh Diem →Surrender and debate: changed "loyalist" to "supposed loyalist" (seeing as the guy rebelled). Is there a reason "loyalist" is used here? Can someone clarify?
• 00:1600:16, 16 November 2007 diff hist +8 Intercourse (book) →Thesis: What is "male literature"? Replaced with "male-centric", as was unsure whether intended "male-written", or just patriarchal lit (thus also including some female-written texts)
• 00:1100:11, 16 November 2007 diff hist −4 Andrea Dworkin →Life in the Netherlands: grammar
• 00:0600:06, 16 November 2007 diff hist −12 Andrea Dworkin →College and early activism: grammar
• 00:0400:04, 16 November 2007 diff hist −1 Andrea Dworkin →Early life: grammar
• 00:0200:02, 16 November 2007 diff hist −15 Andrea Dworkin →Early life: grammar

6 November 2007

• 08:5008:50, 6 November 2007 diff hist 0 Universal grammar →Criticism: inappropriate use of semicolon
• 05:4605:46, 6 November 2007 diff hist −34 Electronic warfare →Electronic attack: Correct me if I'm wrong, but "stealth technology" doesn't seem like any sort of electronic "attack", passive or otherwise...

29 October 2007

• 04:1004:10, 29 October 2007 diff hist −6 Vietnam veteran →In popular culture: minor npov edit
• 04:0704:07, 29 October 2007 diff hist +26 Vietnam veteran →New Zealand veterans: Request for citation as to British involvement

26 October 2007

• 03:2803:28, 26 October 2007 diff hist −183 Armenian genocide denial general style and grammar editing for introduction and terminology sections

25 October 2007

• 04:0004:00, 25 October 2007 diff hist −15 Contesting Is "sport" really the right word?
• 03:5003:50, 25 October 2007 diff hist −10 Vi (text editor) →Interface: Removed extra suffix-ness

24 October 2007

• 02:3802:38, 24 October 2007 diff hist +1 Psychic surgery →Philippines: grammar
• 02:3602:36, 24 October 2007 diff hist −1 Psychic surgery →Procedure: typo: althought -> although
• 02:3502:35, 24 October 2007 diff hist 0 Psychic surgery Edit of previous edit. Replaced "claimed" with "alleged", as seems to be the common form
• 02:3302:33, 24 October 2007 diff hist −19 Psychic surgery Redid first sentence, with the aim of making it slightly less awkward while still maintaining same NPOV
• 02:2202:22, 24 October 2007 diff hist −26 Frank Zappa →Early life and influences: Removed "a racially-mixed outfit" quote. Unless race has some consequence in the article, it should not be mentioned. We don't point out "all-white outfits," for ex.
• 02:1702:17, 24 October 2007 diff hist −32 Frank Zappa →Early life and influences: Remove supercilious note that his mother's 3/4 Italian heritage included Sicilian. Like, so what?
• 02:1302:13, 24 October 2007 diff hist −263 Los Angeles freak scene Request sources for scene evolving from reaction against sexism. Removed etymology of "freak" as this is discussed in its own article (_please_ see discussion). Moved "Fab. Furry Freak Bros." down.
• 02:0402:04, 24 October 2007 diff hist +48 Talk:Los Angeles freak scene →Phone Phreaks: edited my last comment
• 02:0302:03, 24 October 2007 diff hist +1,142 Talk:Los Angeles freak scene →Phone Phreaks
• 01:5101:51, 24 October 2007 diff hist −58 Los Angeles freak scene Phone phreaks are certainly not part of the "freak scene" -> see my comments in the discussion section
• 01:4501:45, 24 October 2007 diff hist −32 Freak →Punk Hair: Removed largely nonsensical use of "existentialist", as noted by former editor.
• 01:4001:40, 24 October 2007 diff hist +26 Freak →Frank Zappa and the Freak Subculture: Request for citation (the statement also seems to be strongly POV; remove, anyone?)
• 01:3901:39, 24 October 2007 diff hist +26 Freak →General: Request citation for seemingly arbitrary statement

21 October 2007

• 04:2604:26, 21 October 2007 diff hist +28 Misogyny →Forms of misogyny: request citation for specific dichotomies (I know the idea, but we need a source)
• 04:2204:22, 21 October 2007 diff hist +27 The Sun Also Rises →Criticism

18 October 2007

• 07:4707:47, 18 October 2007 diff hist +260 Talk:Breast/sandbox →Image Legality

17 October 2007

• 00:3600:36, 17 October 2007 diff hist +87 Talk:Dickies No edit summary
• 00:3300:33, 17 October 2007 diff hist −229 Dickies →Overview: removed gratuitous advertising nonsense (horrible article, still)

15 October 2007

• 16:0216:02, 15 October 2007 diff hist +1 Brothel →Etymology: parenthesis
• 16:0116:01, 15 October 2007 diff hist −39 Brothel →Etymology: Oops... wrote "brothery" on accident. Fixed that, and also corrected list of synonyms to only contain those actually given by the source
• 15:5915:59, 15 October 2007 diff hist +1 Brothel →Etymology: Vandalism fix. Source (not surprisingly) did not give "nunnery" as a synonym for brothel
• 15:5615:56, 15 October 2007 diff hist +27 A Literary Nightmare →History of the jingle: request for citation as to translation into latin